Mindblown: a blog about philosophy.

There are a number of examples of very strong personal and creative expression in this piece, Sam. I’m going to focus (by changing their colour to red) on the phrases and sentences that I feel may need a little more work. Often they are correct, but unclear or even simply clumsy. If you don’t know…

The man strolled down the street without knowing about what was going on around him. She went to the market without considering that she needed help carrying the shopping. The boy and his mates were going to the shop until they saw a group of blue hoodies.

It was a bright cold day in April. The clocks were striking thirteen. Winston Smith made an effort to escape the vile wind. Winston slipped quickly through the glass doors of Victory Mansions. Mr Smith could not prevent the swirl of gritty dust from entering with him

Hi guys, What’s up? My name is Sam and look at my new blog. This is so cool, we get to do our homework on the iPads and then put it onto our at least I think so.This is the best no writing just typing woohoo. Hoping you all the best with your new blog…

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